相思
<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-align:center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">相</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">思</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">你似乎离我很近很近</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">我常能闻到你淡淡的幽香</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">你似乎离我很远很远</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">我总是摸不到你飘飞的长发</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">一次又一次梦中的相逢</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 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roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">却一次又一次被沼泽地陷住双蹄</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">我的白鸽子</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">曾一回又一回飞向你的天空</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">却一回又一回被风雨折断双翅</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> 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style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">当死神为我的生命划上休止符</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">不死的灵魂</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">在白天化为太阳</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">在黑夜化为月亮</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">永远照亮你漂泊的河流</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><font face="Times New Roman">(1996</font></span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">年</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><font face="Times New Roman">1</font></span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">月，原载《中山屏声报》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><font face="Times New Roman">)<p></p></font></span></p> <p>尊敬见到在现在的环境中还能倾情作诗的人</p> <p>与爱情中，相思是一永恒的主题，这其实不关远近。</p><p>诗中，诗人的相思，沉重而执着，沉重如马陷双蹄，鸽断翅膀；执着如青春变老。</p><p>意境跳跃的颇为可喜，结尾略显无力。</p><p></p> 版主点评得不错<br />
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