红尘琴心 发表于 2009-3-21 18:45:43

午后的续编

<strong><font size=3>(六)<br />当灵魂与眼睛,只能在深处凝望<br />汹涌的潮水便激动了每个夜晚<br />到火海里去,到火海中去<br />夜越静、越暗、越凉,火越烈、越响,越旺<br />你没有泪水,我不需挣扎和彷徨<br /><br />当思念被阳光煮沸,结晶是彼此的泪光<br />我的灵魂被你视作黄沙<br />而我血液里盛放的,是你的,另一朵云<br />亲亲,你的痛,你的泪,你的笑,我看不到</font></strong>

红尘琴心 发表于 2009-3-26 12:39:52

<p>整理成相思四章</p><p>相思四章</p><p>  (一)<br />  当灵魂与眼睛,只能在深处凝望<br />  汹涌的潮水便激动了每个夜晚<br />  到火海里去,到火海中去<br />  夜越静、越暗、越凉,火越烈、越响,越旺<br />  你没有泪水,我不需挣扎和彷徨<br />  <br />  当思念被阳光煮沸,结晶是彼此的泪光<br />  我的灵魂被你视作黄沙<br />  而我血液里盛放的,是你的,另一朵云<br />  亲亲,你的痛,你的泪,你的笑,我看不到<br />  <br />  (二)<br />  一波一波的水,漫过思念<br />  漩涡变幻成上万只模糊的手<br />  撕扯人间摇曳的花朵<br />  隐秘中的血,翻开了灼热的眼泪<br />  <br />  我视死如归,漂向深处<br />  让狂澜覆没我的身躯<br />  和疼痛赛跑吧,水<br />  请掏空我的内心保佑我的爱人<br />  <br />  在闪亮的深处,我的眼睛凝视钟爱的脸<br />  我的头颅与血性保持一个姿式<br />  就算我随着爱情死去,云中的尘埃<br />  仍是倏忽来逝的离伤<br />  <br />  (三)<br />  离伤,总是从泥泞的心底爬出<br />  当浮云伸出柔软而坚硬的手指划出一道弧线<br />  我能感觉爱情布满荆棘的狂流<br />  正一步一步吞噬我,让我的泪水成冰<br />  <br />  其实我很想劝慰你,劝慰自己<br />  爬行着,我也要笑出声音<br />  漂浮着,你走的也是卓绝之路<br />  <br />  水,云,狂流,伤,梦<br />  请允许我,不停地,抬起头<br />  看着你,用坚强和世俗的狰狞对峙<br />  <br />  (四)<br />  有时候,我也会坐在灼伤的月光之上<br />  和它一起流泪,一起痛心,一起向往<br />  爱,何时才能躲过支离的命运<br />  爱,何能才能穿越万世的沧桑<br />  <br />  我一次一次浮出水面<br />  一次一次被你伤痕晕眩<br />  水啊,请赐予我利刃<br />  震撼黑暗中巫师虎视耽耽的那双眼<br />  <br />  然后,然后清风伴云来<br />  平静的水面,波光鳞鳞的誓言<br />  以及青衫的红日,再托起生命的枝柯<br />  还有,微笑、悱恻、晶亮的梦幻<br /></p>

红尘琴心 发表于 2009-3-21 18:46:20

<strong><font size=3>(七)<br />一波一波的湘水,漫过思念<br />漩涡变幻成上万只模糊的手<br />撕扯人间摇曳的花朵<br />隐秘中的血,翻开了灼热的眼泪<br /><br />我视死如归,漂向深处<br />让狂澜覆没我的身躯<br />和疼痛赛跑吧,湘水<br />请掏空我的内心保佑我的爱人<br /><br />在闪亮的深处,我的眼睛凝视钟爱的脸<br />我的头颅与血性保持一个姿式<br />就算我随着爱情死去,云中的尘埃<br />仍是倏忽来逝的离伤 </font></strong>

红尘琴心 发表于 2009-3-21 18:48:51

这是一个午后,上一论坛,得一网友相约,狗尾续貂,哈哈,在此记下。

红尘琴心 发表于 2009-3-21 18:49:55

<p>他原文如下:</p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">爱情之殇</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang=EN-US><font face="Times New Roman"></font></span>&nbsp;</p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">思夫君兮太息,極勞心兮忡忡</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang=EN-US><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">——《离骚》</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">《九歌》</span><span lang=EN-US></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">(一)</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">钟、竽、鼓、瑟、箫</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">交响起远古的传说</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">撮耳倾听</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">那是白云盈舞的足音</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">宫、商、角、徽、羽</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">是跳跃在</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">心尖上的金莲之魂</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">一个藏在云里的男人</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">轻得承不起一声长长的叹息</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;"></span>&nbsp;</p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">(二)</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang=EN-US><font face="Times New Roman"></font></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">你从湘水中来,</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">带着落花的哀歌</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">如何能留住流水的脚步</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">于是错过了,那个相约</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">来陪你埋葬落花的男人</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">正忙于驾驭北征的龙舟</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">从此</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">一缕一缕的水草</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">如麻般的刺出</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">绿苔包裹的青石</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang=EN-US><font face="Times New Roman"></font></span>&nbsp;</p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang=EN-US><font face="Times New Roman">(三)</font></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">金、木、水、火、土</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">司命拼着命运的魔方</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">却拼不出爱情的完整图案</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">风中传来菱歌清唱</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">为你涤去云中的尘埃</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">为何不藏住</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">眼中的脉脉苦丝</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">任由编织倏忽来逝的离伤</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">将那个渴饮雨露的女巫</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">囚禁在变幻无端的魔方</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang=EN-US><font face="Times New Roman"></font></span>&nbsp;</p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang=EN-US><font face="Times New Roman">(四)</font></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">龙辇隆隆</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">这满天的霞光</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">如果饮了那杯红</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">谁还记得</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">那青梅竹马的故乡</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">你挣开东天的牵挂</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; 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mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">思兮便忘梳理</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">昨夜狂风吹乱的长萝</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">泪兮便成暴雨</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">冲洗无眠而致的枯槁</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">你轻抚黛眉,凝目远望</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">为何只听见</span></p><p class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">猿啼万重</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;">石泉叮咚</span></p>

Gloria 发表于 2009-3-23 11:34:50

淡淡的文字,我读出的是无尽的思念与哀伤,也许跟今天的心情与天气有关吧!

红尘琴心 发表于 2009-3-23 21:58:25

(八)<br />离伤,总是从泥泞的心底爬出<br />当浮云伸出柔软而坚硬的手指划出一道弧线<br />我能感觉爱情布满荆棘的狂流<br />正一步一步吞噬我,让我的泪水成冰<br /><br />其实我很想劝慰你,劝慰自己<br />爬行着,我也要笑出声音<br />漂浮着,你走的也是卓绝之路<br /><br />水,云,狂流,伤,梦<br />请允许我,不停地,抬起头<br />看着你,用坚强和世俗的狰狞对峙

红尘琴心 发表于 2009-3-23 21:59:36

(九)<br />有时候,我也会坐在灼伤的月光之上<br />和它一起流泪,一起痛心,一起向往<br />爱,何时才能躲过被绞的命运<br />爱,何能才能穿越万世沧桑<br /><br />我一次一次浮出水面<br />一次一次被你伤痕晕眩<br />湘水啊,请赐予我利刃<br />震撼黑暗中巫师虎视耽耽的那双眼<br /><br />然后,然后清风伴云来<br />平静的水面,波光鳞鳞的誓言<br />以及青衫的红日,再托起生命的枝柯<br />还有,微笑、悱恻、晶亮的梦幻

lanmi 发表于 2009-3-24 08:51:27

一读再读,感触万千!

lanmi 发表于 2009-3-26 13:28:15

不同心境,读出不同的味道!
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