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甘泉 发表于 2011-7-31 19:57:07

古韵新声（三首）

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甘泉 发表于 2011-7-31 20:00:28

本人酷爱中华传统诗词，已作诗词作品近百首，现奉上拙作三首，请各位同仁及方家不吝指教，在此不胜感激。

Blues 发表于 2011-8-1 10:24:50

才子啊，让我等仰望ing。。。。。。

飞鱼 发表于 2011-8-1 10:47:20

哥没文化，对古诗词真看不太懂哈。

zhuhu07 发表于 2011-8-1 11:34:02

难得论坛还有此等人才啊！

xiaowang 发表于 2011-8-1 13:26:54

<p>支持一下！</p>

boyi 发表于 2011-8-1 16:04:58

支持一下，期待更多分享。

红尘琴心 发表于 2011-8-2 07:36:54

<p>一组感怀，或渲彩或素描，随景兴怀，平淡有工。</p><p>美中不足的是，第一首雕凿痕迹尚欠平和。</p><p></p>

Blues 发表于 2011-8-2 14:08:08

<p>才子怎么又不上来了？</p>

zjmeisheng 发表于 2011-8-2 14:28:39

<p>楼主蛮厉害的，我的古诗词功底可是很差的</p>

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